Kamis, 15 Oktober 2015

ACTIVE AND PASSIVE VOICE

Active voice
In most English sentences with an action verb, the subject performs the action denoted by the verb.

Use of Active Voice: 
  • This sentence type is generally shorter.
  • Verb use is generally active. (often accompanied by are or is "Be" verbs
  • Even if being done in the past tense, the verb generally follows the subject. In essence, make the person doing the action come first.
EXAMPLE:
Candice mailed the letter. 
- Candice (subject) performs the action denoted by the verb (mail)


Passive voice
One can change the normal word order of many active sentences (those with a direct object) so that the subject is no longer active, but is, instead, being acted upon by the verb - or passive.
    Note in these examples how the subject-verb relationship has changed.

Use of Passive Voice:
  • Passive sentences are usually longer, demanding more tense "being" verbs in order to function.
  • Passive sentences tell us that what is being done is more important than who is doing it. The reason you aren't supposed to write "passive" sentences is because this condition flies in the face of the "universe rule" -- the person is always the most important (socially).
  • The Passive voice often leads off with the CLEFT subject
  • The SUBJUNCTIVE (tag) sentence is the closest to passive and we tend to use it to make peace or to get something we want.
EXAMPLE:
 The letter was being mailed.
- In the example above, the focus is on the fact that the letter was being mailed.
 


PATTERNS:

SIMPLE PRESENT TENSE

Active: Subject + infinitive + object
Adriana cleans the house
 
Passive: S + to be + past participle + by object
The house is cleaned by Adriana
 
Present Continuous Tense

Active: Subject + to be (is/am/are) being + present participle + object
Behati is watching a movie
 
Passive: S + to be (is/am/are) + being + past participle + by object
Movie is being watched by Behati
 
Present Perfect Tense

Active: Subject + has/have + past participle + object
Many visitors have visited that water park
 
Passive: S + have/has been + past participle + by object
That water park has been visited by many visitors
 
Simple Past Tense

Active: Subject + past participle + object
Lily smashed the mirror
 
Passive: S + was/were + past participle + by object
The mirror was smashed by Lily
 
Past Continuous Tense

Active: S + was/were + being + past participle + object
They were eating batagor when I was studied
 
Passive: S + was/were + being + past participle +by object
Batagor were being eaten by them when I studied
 
Past Perfect Tense

Active: Subject + had + past participle + object
My brother had given some money
 
Passive: S + had been + past participle + by object
Some money had been given by my brother
 

PASSIVE VOICE WITH MODALS

"CAN, MAY, MIGHT, OUGHT TO, SHOULD, MUST"

The places of subjects and objects will be changed with each other. Past participles will be used only in passive voice. Auxiliary "be" are needed when we try to change active sentences with modals to passive. We place the auxiliary "be" after the modals.
 
Active voice: CAN
 
She can bake a red velvet. 
She cannot bake a red velvet.
Can she bake a red velvet?

Passive voice: CAN BE
A red velvet can be baked by her.
A red velvet cannot be baked by her.
Can a red velvet be baked by her?
 
Active voice: MAY
I may sell the ripped jeans.
I may not sell the ripped jeans.
May I sell the ripped jeans?

Passive voice: MAY BE
The ripped jeans may be sold by me.
The ripped jeans may not be sold by me.
May the  ripped jeans be sold by me?
 
Active voice: MIGHT 
Visitors might get some drinks.
 Visitors might not get some drinks.

Passive voice: MIGHT BE
Some drinks might be got by visitors.
Some drinks might not be got by visitors.

Active voice: SHOULD
Parents should encourage children.
Parents should not encourage children.
Should parents encourage children?

Passive voice: SHOULD BE
Children should be encouraged by parents.
Children should not be encouraged by parents.
Should children be encouraged by parents?
 
Active voice: MUST
You must follow the rules.
You must not follow the rules.

Passive voice: MUST BE
The rules must be follow by you.
The rules must not be follow by you.
 
Active voice: OUGHT TO
They ought to take the medicine.

Passive voice: OUGHT TO BE
The medicine ought to be taken by them.
 
 
Transitive and Intransitive Verbs

Transitive verbs are verbs which have subjects and object in one sentences or clauses. Transitive verbs can be in active or passive voice. Transitive verbs in active voice are the verbs which are followed by the direct objects. A transitive verbs needs object to express full meaning.
 
Example: The boy jumped the rope. The subject is the actor who does the action and the direct object is the receiver of the action.
Meanwhile, Transitive passive verbs have the subject receiving the action.
Examples: The rope was jumped by the boy. The rope was jumped high. The verbs in the transitive passive voice always have "is, am, are, was, were, be, being, or been" as auxiliaries.

Intransitive verbs don't have receiver of the action. They are classified as intransitive complete or intransitive linking. Intransitive linking are sentences with a predicate nominative or predicate adjective. 
 
Examples: The doctor is Beckham. (predicate nominative) The doctor is friendly. (predicate adjective) Intransitive complete are all the verbs that don't fit one of the other kinds of transitive or intransitive verbs. 
Examples: The computer shut down suddenly. The girl cried all night. (There is no receiver of the action.) They were here. (no action or predicate nominative or predicate adjective).

Intransitive verb cannot be changed into passive voice. The sentences which have intransitive verbs cannot be changed into passive voice. The reason behind that statement is that there is no object in the sentences and we all know that without objects we cannot change the sentences to passive voice.
 

Some Intransitive Verbs 

These verbs do not occur with objects. For this reason, they cannot take passive forms.
agree appear arrive become
belong collapse consist of cost
depend die disappear emerge
exist fall go happen³
have¹ inquire knock  laugh
lie live look last 
occur remain respond rise
sit sleep stand stay
swim vanish wake² wait 
 
 
 
ACTIVE AND PASSIVE VOICE EXERCISE
 
I. Sentences are given in the active voice. Change them into the passive voice.
 
1. Zayn ate six sausages at dinner. 
2. The director will give you instructions.
3. The team will celebrate their victory tomorrow.
4. The kangaroo carried her baby in her pouch.
5. The wedding planner is making all the reservations.
6. Larry generously donated money to the homeless shelter.
7. Who taught you to ski? 


II. Tell whether the verbs in the following sentences are transitive active, transitive passive, intransitive linking, or intransitive complete.
 
1.       Heat expands metals.
2.       Metals expand on heating.
3.       The driver stopped the car.
4.       The car stopped abruptly.
5.       You must speak the truth.
6.       You must speak loudly.
7.       The boy is flying the kite.
8.       The birds are flying in the sky.
9.       The rider fell off the horse and broke his arm.
10.   The woodcutter felled a huge tree.
11.   The explosion sank the ship.
12.   The ship sank suddenly.

 
 Answers

I.
1. At dinner, six sausages were eaten by Zayn. 
2. Instructions will be given to you by the director.
3. The victory will be celebrated by the team tomorrow.
4. The baby was carried by the kangaroo in her pouch.
5. All the reservations will be made by the wedding planner. 
6. Money was generously donated to the homeless shelter by Larry. 
7. By whom were you taught to ski?

II
1.       Transitive active – expands ( object – metals)
2.       Intransitive passive – expand
3.       Transitive active – stopped (object – car)
4.       Intransitive verb – stopped
5.       Transitive active – speak (object – truth)
6.       Intransitive active – speak
7.       Transitive verb – is flying (object – kite)
8.       Intransitive verb – are flying
9.       Intransitive verb – fell off
10.   Transitive verb – felled (object – tree)
11.   Transitive verb – sank (object – ship)
12.   Intransitive verb – sank


Sources: 
http://www.towson.edu/ows/activepass.htm 
http://www.studyandexam.com/passive-voice-for-intransitive-verb.html
http://cstl-cla.semo.edu/tmeaton/grammar09d2passive.htm
http://www.grammar-quizzes.com/passive1d.html
http://www.englishgrammar.org/transitive-intransitive-verbs-exercise/

Minggu, 07 Juni 2015

Proposal Bisnis Kerjasama

Petshop&DogglesEyeware


1. LatarBelakang
Kewirausahaan (Entrepreneurship) atau Wirausaha adalah proses mengidentifikasi, mengembangkan, dan membawa visi kedalam kehidupan. Visi tersebut bias berupa ide inovatif, peluang, cara yang lebih baik dalam menjalankan sesuatu.Hasil akhir dari proses tersebut adalah penciptaan usaha baru yang dibentuk pada kondisi risiko atau ketidakpastian. Jadi kewirausahaan merupakan suatu kemampuan dalam menciptakan nilai tambah di pasarmelalui proses pengelolaan sumber daya dengan cara-cara baru dan berbeda
Di Indonesia sebenarnya sudah banyak sekali tempat-tempat untuk memanjakan atau membeli hewan peliharaan kucing dan anjing atau yang sering juga disebut Pet Shop. Tak dapat dipungkiri jika golongan penyuka hewan peliharaan tidak hanya datang dari kaum ekonomi atas tapi juga bisa datang dari orang-orang kalangan ekonomi menengah atau rendah.
Dari penjelasan latar belakang diatas, maka kami tertarik untuk melakukan kegiatan usaha dengan menggunakan cara membuat sendiri produk yang akan dijual. Dalam hal ini, produk yang kami tawarkan berupa Petshop&DogglesEyeware yang merupakan tempat yang menjual berbagai macam jenis kucing hias dan aksesoris anjing, disini kami kami menawarkan harga hewan peliharaan yang relative terjangkau khususnya bagi para mahasiswa yang gemar memelihara hewan peliharaan.

2. VisidanMisi
Visi
Memberikan konsumen kualitas bagus dengan harga terjangkau
Misi
Memberikan kemudahan bagi pecinta hewan peliharaan khususnya mahasiswa yang umumnya memiliki budget rendah

3. Analisis SWOT Bisnis
 a) Strength (Kekuatan)
Harga relatif terjangkau
Kesehatan hewan peliharaan terjamin
Hewan peliharaan sudah di vaksin
Alat pelindung mata hewan peliharaan masih sangat jarang ditemui khususnya di  Indonesia, kami menghadirkan produk yang mungkin selama ini dicari oleh pemilik hewan peliharaan
Pemilihan lokasi yang berada didekat universitas Gunadarma
Pilihan model Doggleseyeware yang variatif 
b) Weakness (Kelemahan)
Petshop harus memiliki izin sebelumnya
DogglesEyeware yang kami jual cukup menguras budget

c) Oppurtunity (Peluang)
Lokasi Petshop kami berada didekat kampus, sangat cocok karena target kami adalah mahasiswa
Produk Doggles Eyewear yang kami jualdibuat daribahan-bahan ramah lingkungan dan sangat nyaman digunakan oleh hewan peliharaan anda
d) Threat (Hambatan)
Bisnisusaha yang kami jalankan memiliki kompetitor yang tidak sedikit dengan maraknya kehadiran petshop-petshop lain.

5. a) Produk yang akan dijual 
Input Librarian Petshop adalah 2 ekor indukan kucing betina yang siap kawin terdiri dari 2 Jenis yaitu Persia dan Angora.

Output Librarian Petshop
adalah anakan kucing yang mana setelah berumur kurang lebih 2 bulan anakan tersebut siap untuk dijual. Adapun proses perkawinannya dilakukan dengan system kawin sewa (dilakukan kerjasama dengan rekanan). Sistem kawin tersebut dengan rincian untuk jenis Persia terkena biaya sebesarRp 500.000,- sedangkan untukAnggora terkena biaya sebesar Rp 150.000,- .
Dalam
menghitung rincian biaya ini kami mengasumsikan bahwa setiap induk akan menghasilkan 4 ekor anak, dengan biaya makan selama 2 bulan sebesarRp. 50.000,- per ekor dan biaya perawatan selama 2 bulan sebesarRp. 20.000,- per ekor. Sementara produk yang kami jual adalah Doggles Eyewear kami menawarkan "penyerapan UV sampai 400 nm," yang merupakan Untuk anjing dengan penyakit mata semakin umum, panas, Doggles terbukti sendiri sangat berguna. Hal ini juga diketahui bahwa anjing dengan pannus harus tetap keluar dari matahari langsung dan mendapat perlindungan dari sinar UV. Doggles merupakan alternatif yang bagus untuk anjing-anjing yang tidak dapat tinggal di dalam siang hari.
b) Penawaran dan permintaan
Pada umumnya pemilik hewan peliharaan selalu ingin memberikan yang terbaik untuk hewan peliharaannya kami hadir denganDoggles Eyewear Kacamata serapan UV-dan Doggles dapat membantu melindungi mata hewan peliharaan Anda dari kerusakan akibat sinar matahari dan juga menjual kucing hias dengan harga terjangkau.
c) Harga jual produk
Harga jual produk yang kami tawarkan kepelanggan untuk tiap produk Doggles Eyewear sebesarRp. 200.000
1. Harga indukan betina siap kawin                                   2. BiayaKawin
a. Persia                  RP. 2.400.000,-                                 a. Persia  Rp. 500.000,-
b. Anggora              Rp. 900.000,-                                    b. Anggora  Rp. 150.000,-

6. AnalisisProduksi
Dalam kegiatan usaha ini, kami terdapat beberapa jenis analisis produksi yaitu analisis produksi Doggles Eyewear, harga jual kucing dan proses perkawinan kucing dengan perincian sebagai berikut :
1. Analisis Produk Doggles Eyewear
Bahan-bahan (100 unit Doggles Eyewear) 

Bantalan Busa          (Rp. 900.000)
Polycar bonate           (Rp. 3.500.000)
Lensa Anti Kabut       (Rp. 5.000.000)
Talielastis                 (Rp. 600.000)       
Total                   Rp. 10.000.000

2. Analisis proses perkawinan kucing

Dengan
rincian :
Ongkos
Kawin = Rp. 150.000

Biaya
Makan (2kg) Pelet = Rp. 50.000,-
Biaya
Perawatan = Rp. 20.000,-                      
                                                                    Total Rp. 220.000

3. Analisis harga jual kucing
A. Persia
Harga
Jual Per Ekor (2 bulan) =Rp. 750.000,-
Harga
Pokok Per Ekor=(Rp. 200.000,-)
Laba Per Ekor = Rp. 570.000,-

B. Angora
HargaJual Per Ekor (2 bulan) = Rp. 300.000,-
HargaPokok Per Ekor = (Rp. 92.500,-)
Laba Per Ekor = Rp. 207.500,-
 7. Proyeksi Keuangan
Sewatempat                                              Rp. 10.000.000
Listrik                                                       Rp. 500.000
20 buah Kandang Hewan                        Rp. 6.000.000
3 sak makan kucing                                 Rp. 900.000
Total                                                           Rp. 17.400.000

Anggaran Doggles Eyewear       
Rp. 10.000.000                 
Anggaran perkawinan kucing Anggora          
Rp.  400.000
Anggaran perkawinan kucing Persia             
Rp. 500.000
Prediksi Penjualan:
Doggles Eyewear : 100 buah
Kucing persia : 10 ekor
Kucing Anggora : 10 ekor
ü Kegagalan    : 2%
Kegagalan doggles eyewear (2% x 100) = 2 eyewear
ü Harga jual produk    :
Persia : Rp 500.000/ekor
Anggora : Rp. 400.000/ekor
Doggles eyewear : Rp. 200.000/buah

Keuntungan 
- Doggles Eyewear (100 buah)
untung per produk = harga penerimaan – harga pengeluaran
20.000.000 - 10.000.000 = 10.000.000
- Perkawinan kucing anggora 
untung per produk = harga penerimaan – harga pengeluaran
400.000 - 150.000 = 250.000 
- Perkawinan kucing persia
 untung per produk = hargapenerimaan - hargapengeluaran
500.000 - 150.000 = 350.000

8. Strategi Bisnis 
Dalam pemasaran harus pandai dalam mengatur harga, tempat penjualan, melakukan promosi produk, salah satu cara promosi adalah menawarkan harga miring khusus untuk mahasiswa dan pelajar.
1) Mengatur Tempat Penjualan
Tempat berlangsung nya usaha kami di ruko sekitar kampus Universitas Gunadarma
2) Strategi Produk
Kami menawarkan kucing hias yang sehat dan bersih dan kacamata anjing dengan fashion trend masa kini.
3) Promosi Produk
Promosi produk kami terhadap para pelanggan dengan mempromosikan di lingkungan kampus

9. Rencana Aktivitas
Dalam menjalankan usaha ini, kami berencana untuk menwarkan produk-produk kami mulai pukul 09.00 WIB dengan membagikan flyer kepada mahasiswa, pekerja atau masyarakat disekitar. Selain itu, kami juga memproduksikan melalui situs jejaring sosial seperti Twitter, Facebook, instagram, dll.